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Okay this is a rough intro to the protagonist to a novel im writing.... thoughts or suggestions please









Begin Transmission\:A man walks through the battlefield. War. This man is the last surviving member of his squad and is desperate to complete his mission. He is about 6' tall, 185 lbs. Short brown hair and brown eyes. He has rugged facial features including a scar down his left cheek. His goatee is getting long because he's been in the desert for weeks. A once happy person, he is now an emotionless hollow shell of a man. His once passionate eyes resenating a dim glow now, a look of fire and hate. He hates the rocky terrain he is in and his proud uniform of a GI Special Operations Infantry-man is tattered and torn. He stands up right and proud even though he has been through pure hell these past weeks. He knows the end is near but he will not relent in his mission//:end transmission