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Moving is a challenge

Each step harder than the last

Even blinking is tiring

Eyes are heavy, body aches

Just need to keep moving

Can't stop, it all depends on this

I reach the door, success

I step through to the other side

And at the end of the way

I fall, energy gone

Weariness finally takes over

I pass out

I fall to the floor

From complete and total exhaustion

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yamato0koya
05:31 Feb 04 2009

I know that feeling. :>

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ladySnowStrixx
01:28 Feb 13 2009

I feel your pain , have been here every night when i came home from work

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NumFon
04:34 Feb 18 2009

nice poem

give some hope as first and the will to contiues but what's waiting at the end is just disappointment(mispell-srry)

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CrimsonSmiles
06:36 Aug 19 2009

I like this very much~

It's so simple, yet it portrays so much.

Mmm this is the first poem I read of yours, but I am adorning your style already. And I am a lady of no lies.

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The words are burning within my mind

Ready to be spoken

This is the Evocation of Eternal Fire

Boom, boom, boom, the drums resound

My heart matching their continuous beat

Boom, boom, boom, I begin

"Oh God Ifrit, master of the Eternal Flame

Lord of Death and Rebirth

Holder of the sun

Who's power could scorch the entire earth!"

Boom, boom, boom, boom, the beat gets faster

"Take up flight and burn the pillars of persecution

Rise once again and show your might

Banish the evil, sear it with your holy flame

Leave none of it, char it to cinders!"

Boom, boom, boom, boom, boom

"Arise O' Mighty Ifrit

Bless the sky with your grace

Protect the good and destroy the wicked

Bring us peace and salvation

Arise, arise, arise!" boom, boom, boom

"Come forth in a tornado of flame!

Boom, boom, boom, boom, drums beat erratically

"Fire, punishment, peace, tranquility

Peace!"

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JigokuShoujo
05:40 Feb 06 2009

Rather good...nicely done.

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Rising from the ashes of death

Emanating power and life

Its cry pierces the sky

It beats its enormous wings

Burning everything around it

It rises into the air

Soaring into the sky

Fire following behind it

It lets out another piercing wail

It rises higher into the sky

Its body radiates with holy flames

One more cry for the departed

Then the fire erupts from its body

And it returns to the earth

What was taken long ago

The holy flame of the phoenix

Given by the fire god Ifrit

Bringing peace and

Bringing life to a dying planet

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yamato0koya
05:27 Feb 04 2009

Beautifully put. Life and death in the eminent circle.

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