Life speeds by us uncaring and cold never stopping to see the pain, the loss, and the hate, the lies and the deceit, but Death gives us rest and the peace we long for after Life has tossed us around and thrown us away, Death awaits us with open arms and Life just passes us by uncaring and as cold and as distant as the night sky.
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yamato0koya
02:07 Oct 25 2008
It's lovely. . . Sad. . . But lovely. . .
RaineVampire
01:54 Nov 14 2008
sad... but so true...
I like it ...
NightlyXForest
05:33 Nov 14 2008
Very good, a good focus on life and death in the world today.
xXxDaylightDiesxXx
21:20 Nov 14 2008
Pretty.
DarkAngelPrincess89
03:58 Dec 07 2008
i love the poem very much it almost made me cry
foreveranangelicvampire
05:23 Feb 09 2009
True and beautiful.
Rhoswen
23:14 Nov 15 2009
In my mind as well, i understand live to be as you have explained. Great poem!