Another pair of poems.The constructed poem there is de-constructed in a rather chaotic manner.Both contain some chaos and order in the manner of writing and in the sentimental vision that preceded them.The poems are the result of the fiery force of the reverie but also of the metallic letter of the technique.
The title of both poems, Aion completes both titles of the poems with reference to Therion and Erechteion and gives one more clue about the depths of the poems.
There
I`m still here
ghost of your aim
reaching with stoned wings
the hollow air from of the landscape that hold you
the snow cluttered by your tears
of joy
still
trying to drink
from the liquid glass of memory
that holds the frozen liquor of memories
still convincing
the clay to do me another pattern
in another age
so I could smell your scent
mixed with the paper-toys and leaf-masks
I will be buried in after the crush
still in this fall
I scratch the fleshy cord of the life
on the inside
still crying out a feral chant
in the pulp of the self
in the sea of silence
are you still
there
?
Ereht
I`m still here
there
ghost of your aim
are you still
reaching with stoned wings
in the sea of silence
the hollow air from of the landscape that hold you
in the pulp of self
the snow cluttered by your tears
still crying out a feral chant
of joy
on the inside
still
I scratch the fleshy cord of life
trying to drink
still in this fall
from the liquid glass of memory
I will be buried in after the crush
that holds the frozen liquor of memories
mixed with paper-toys and leaf-masks
still convincing
the clay to do me another pattern
so I could smell your scent
in another age
mute Romeo
caressing our nostrils
with the memory of the ages
they brought us back
together
in the same trunk
long after our death by blood letting
(with the blood
the vampires created us real palaces in their real world)
they put us on a stage
and lent spotlights to our eyepits
so we can take their
applause
but my mouth is not saying a word
because of the fans of hate
compressed in the breathing air
I just drink
from the lovely sour liquor again
with the color of blood
looking in Juliet`s eyes
while I strew my smile to her smut tiny
feet
Juliet is speaking
but my mouth is not saying a word
I just drink
from the lovely sour liquor again
caressing our nostrils
with the memory of the ages
they brought us back
together
because of the fans of hate
with the color of blood
looking in Romeo`s eyes
in the same trunk
long after our twin death
(with the blood
the vampires created us real palaces in their real world)
compressed in the breathing air
while I strew my smile to her smut tiny
feet
they put us on a stage
and lent spotlights to our eyepits
so we can take their
applause
COMMENTS
the never ending love story
Nice take on it hon.
COMMENTS
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Myrka
10:52 Jul 31 2009
Beautiful poems with very strong imagery.
ThothLestat
14:10 Jul 31 2009
fantastic, DR!
AlexandraAshes
03:50 Aug 01 2009
*silent awe*
Dragonrouge
04:04 Aug 25 2009
*takes an elegant bow*
my friends,
your pleasure when you read this is my only happiness
so please imagine how vital your good words are to me