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If You Cared

09:43 Mar 16 2009
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Well the first time I write a damn poem in over a year and my inspiration has to be someone making me feel like shit. Go figure. Should have no it would happen sooner or later it always does. Just the beginning of the same old song and dance.







If you cared

You'd make me smile

As I sit.

On this cold bathroom tile.



Wanting to cut my flesh

To the bone

Feeling unloved

Feeling Alone.



If you cared

I would feel pain

I wouldn't think

These thoughts in my brain



If you cared

I wouldn't hurt inside

I would be in the open

With you by my side.



But I sit alone

In the dark.

My torment

It rips me apart.



You don't care

You just roll over and sleep

Not giving a damn

That it hurts deep.



I guess you don't care.

You don't care at all

Letting it go

Just letting it fall.



So that it all

Can break.

But everything

Is give and take.



I give so much

yes I try

You might as well spit

In my eye.



But if you cared

Just one little bit

On this cold floor I wouldn't sit.


COMMENTS

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Tourmented
Tourmented
08:58 Mar 22 2009

i like it i feel the same :(





vampiregothchick
vampiregothchick
18:41 May 18 2009

Oh yes, totally understand this too!!!








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