Lay down your fantasy on my altar of darkness as death's knell entones it's warning this night.
I require no more then a taste with my cold death's embrace and your still-beating heart tastes so sweet.
I won't take your soul as the monsters of olde.
My needs will then feast--a few moments of bliss; a moment of pain so divine. Then turn me around and take me just then. Empassion me with your love. Say goodbye with a smile and remember us when. Your memory lingers on my lips.
come in from the dark night
come and sit by my firelight
I've just fed so you needn't worry
What's that you ask?
Tis only my farie. She's full of fun
if you like scary.
Warm yourself more till you feel good inside.
I've a good idea--I'll take you for a ride.
We'll glide along into the night
I don't bite hard--don't put up a fight
What's that you ask-you thought I'd fed?
I didn't want to fill you with dread.
I'll tell you true right now for sure.
I lied.....
Step inside my domination
Have a seat and buckle down.
For the price of a kiss, I'll slip inside your mind
and pull the scream from your lips.
Blissful silence follows as I throw away the key
to those shackles around your cocky little fantasy.
Cold hearted bitch is my job not my name
when I push you down on bended knee
waiting, waiting to be, perhaps the one in a million
I deign to remember.
Dharkling
06/12/12
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you like to be dominator, in your life and your prey the one you choose. the one you like you maybe want balance but can there really be a balance if your nature is to dominate? you want to be loved and accepted for who you are but people keep fantasizing about your nature rather than knowing your feelings. knowing your feelings they tend to try to use them but you wont let them cause you are the one to dominate? I dont know. correct me if i am wrong but its my point of seeing your poem as for the rest is hot and passionate one and well written
Please refer to a PM I've sent you regarding the poetry Mirror. You are very perceptive in many aspects. Thank you for your honesty. I respect that more then anything.
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here is my first aspect:
there is no much rhyme but also seems to be interesting certain words to me as i am dyslectic are a bit difficult like bedlam so unless you are patient enough to explain it to me I can't really understand. but it seems you have written it from the heart yet hard to say goodbye but in the same time you seem to have no choice.
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