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The Forbidden Island (part 1)

06:30 Feb 11 2017
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It was a dark and stormy night the wind howled and the ocean crashed heavily into the old clipper ship lost at sea for many months. It got off course an sailed to the upper northern seas where it gets very cold an icy there. The year was 1658 the crew an it's captain was put under a spell that made them act like zombies but was able to work the ship just not in there normal manner of speaking.



It passed by so many places that it crashed onto the shape rocks around the Forbidden Island. The crew an there captain was thrown into the icy cold waters it awoken them from the spell they was under an swam to the shore an all laid there very tired from swimming to get on the beach. They rested there for 30-40 minutes. Till it was time to get up an figure out where they was an if there was life and or food on this strange Island they all were on together. There beautiful ship sunk deep into the ocean floor.



All there items was out on top of the waters an the waves moved it closer to them. When it normally pushs it away. They gathered up all that they could they where all armed with sword an knifes an daggers. They went in small groups to look for wood an then some went to go look for food of any kind. Some stayed behide an fished an others looked to build some sort of tint like to keep them dry from the storm if it should start up again.



The two groups came back with wood an food an they got a bonfire going an they cooked an ate the foods they found in the area close by were they was setting up camp for the night. As they slept many heard awful strange noises deep within the Island itself. A small group of the crew went to go see where the noises was coming from. Then they came to a huge cave they heard it from inside so they softly an quietly went in an they saw what looked like humans dancing, laughing, eating bloody animals that they caught.



The crew watched but, then one was very scared an afraid an the human like smelled the fear an they all turned around an there eyes slowly turned a bright red an hissed at the group. These was no humans but in fact vampires. The crew started to turn an run but the vampires caught them before they got out of the cave. They grabbed an ripped them apart piece by piece feasting on the flesh and blood. The cry's and screams was heard by the rest of the crew an there captain as well.


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RaynesAsylum
RaynesAsylum
05:11 Feb 12 2017

nice storry





Edica
Edica
16:28 Feb 26 2017

very good





Elizabethbathory33
Elizabethbathory33
21:21 Sep 06 2017

Ooooo I love it ^_^





DarkestTemptation
DarkestTemptation
03:26 Sep 07 2017

I am glad you enjoyed it working on some more.





Minde
Minde
06:06 Sep 18 2017

This i like





organicpanther24
organicpanther24
20:16 Oct 20 2017

Very good! 🙂





Darkangel1876
Darkangel1876
15:43 Jun 27 2018

Very good





ValoreNexus
ValoreNexus
15:08 Aug 07 2018

Loved it dear








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