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Oh Angel Of Mercy

12:46 Dec 05 2007
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Oh angel of mercy release me of my prison

Swiftly take from me this wretched life

My body is broken and lays upon the ground

Do not leave me to suffer so from this pain

I cannot move and my vision is failing me

I can hear the sirens and muffled voices

The flashing lights are but a blur to me

My breathing is labored am my heart beats fast

My voice is gone I cannot scream or speak

My blood flows out and staining the ground

Blessed death come swiftly and take me away

My body grows cold and the lights grow dim

I hear a far away voice begging me to stay

I do not wish to hold on I am so tired

A hand reaches out pulling me from the ground

Oh Angel Of Mercy...here at last


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SHADOWCAT13
SHADOWCAT13
23:21 Feb 14 2008

Angle Of Mercy is Living Flesh. Madam DA? Those who care are all around you, now, and they do. Dark yet beautifully written; You have a genuine talent.



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cadrewolf
cadrewolf
21:08 Mar 18 2008

a well written piece, draws me into the emotional feeling. well done








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