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The Dream of a Broken Man

06:19 May 14 2007
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I watch everyone run about their lives

No one notices the broken man

I dream dreams of what it would be like if i was whole

No one sees the smile on the broken mans face

i see the war and pain so i scream stop it do you not see the pain and devastation

No one hears the broken mans screams

I call out to anyone and everyone

No one hears the broken mans calls

I plead with the gods and goddess for help for anything to fight the loneliness

No one feels the pain of a broken man


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painfullyDark
painfullyDark
10:09 Jan 14 2008

You are never alone.



fallenangel51
fallenangel51
01:47 Sep 04 2008

I hear the broken man. I feel your pain. Meet me under the tree.





xcrimsonlustx
xcrimsonlustx
13:00 Sep 06 2008

Be well friend! :)





Leinth
Leinth
09:49 Apr 13 2009

There is no greater pain of feeling alone and broken......





 

If I Died Today

05:41 May 14 2007
Times Read: 826


If I Died today would anyone care

If my heart stoped beating would you shed a tear

If I was dieing would you be their to hold my hand

If my life ended would you notice the tears from my heart breaking

If I died would anyone notice

If I died would your tears be as countless as the stars

If my heart beats and my poems stop

Would they or I be missed

No I would lay buried and forgotten


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MistressLilium
MistressLilium
06:37 May 07 2008

As I read this I was thinking, hey he sounds like he could really use some love in his life, well then again I thought of this...

You seem like you want people to come to you and notice you. You need to make yourself be noticed. In life you can't wait for things to happen, you have to make them happen. You have to make people notice you , miss you when you're gone, you have to make them want to hear your poems. Otherwise, it's a life not worth living.





BlondeGothette
BlondeGothette
00:45 May 09 2008

I trully feel the pain in this one....much like my own.....good work, well done.





LadyRaniofArtic
LadyRaniofArtic
22:08 Jul 22 2008

someone would care.





TaintedAngel14
TaintedAngel14
03:21 Jul 27 2008

well, id care....





DarkGoodBye
DarkGoodBye
10:05 Aug 03 2008

I really like this poem it is very deep and well writen.





DarkGoodBye
DarkGoodBye
05:41 Aug 10 2008

I would care hun=^_^=





midnightbite
midnightbite
00:39 Sep 03 2008

id miss u V--V





fallenangel51
fallenangel51
01:51 Sep 04 2008

*she would be sad*

*she would miss him*

*she would plant a forest of trees wait for it to grow and sit under one of them crying*





Mau
Mau
18:52 Dec 05 2008

I love poetry, I as well am I writer.. I have been for many years.. to me it is the food of life.. for through its nurishment, we recieve wisdom.. some of the greatest knowledge we discover is by our simple thoughts.. and to answer your last question.. I am..





QueenofNight
QueenofNight
10:28 Mar 24 2009

that is how i feel at times





deathangelsdarkrose
deathangelsdarkrose
20:05 Apr 21 2009

im sure someone would care, i would





MissesXYasutora
MissesXYasutora
17:49 May 08 2009

I would notice

I would grieve

And cradle my knees

I would cry new tears

And never swalow my fears

I would hold your dieing hand,

As your life slips away like sand.



But I have one question to ask would you miss me?





snakecarmer
snakecarmer
19:31 Jan 29 2010

i would noticed and i would be very sad if you were to die





shadowdragon13
shadowdragon13
02:15 Feb 06 2010

If you died today you would die in my arms .... A kiss to send you to the next life ...where I would find you again .








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