I watch everyone run about their lives
No one notices the broken man
I dream dreams of what it would be like if i was whole
No one sees the smile on the broken mans face
i see the war and pain so i scream stop it do you not see the pain and devastation
No one hears the broken mans screams
I call out to anyone and everyone
No one hears the broken mans calls
I plead with the gods and goddess for help for anything to fight the loneliness
No one feels the pain of a broken man
If I Died today would anyone care
If my heart stoped beating would you shed a tear
If I was dieing would you be their to hold my hand
If my life ended would you notice the tears from my heart breaking
If I died would anyone notice
If I died would your tears be as countless as the stars
If my heart beats and my poems stop
Would they or I be missed
No I would lay buried and forgotten
COMMENTS
As I read this I was thinking, hey he sounds like he could really use some love in his life, well then again I thought of this...
You seem like you want people to come to you and notice you. You need to make yourself be noticed. In life you can't wait for things to happen, you have to make them happen. You have to make people notice you , miss you when you're gone, you have to make them want to hear your poems. Otherwise, it's a life not worth living.
I trully feel the pain in this one....much like my own.....good work, well done.
someone would care.
well, id care....
I really like this poem it is very deep and well writen.
I would care hun=^_^=
id miss u V--V
*she would be sad*
*she would miss him*
*she would plant a forest of trees wait for it to grow and sit under one of them crying*
I love poetry, I as well am I writer.. I have been for many years.. to me it is the food of life.. for through its nurishment, we recieve wisdom.. some of the greatest knowledge we discover is by our simple thoughts.. and to answer your last question.. I am..
that is how i feel at times
im sure someone would care, i would
I would notice
I would grieve
And cradle my knees
I would cry new tears
And never swalow my fears
I would hold your dieing hand,
As your life slips away like sand.
But I have one question to ask would you miss me?
i would noticed and i would be very sad if you were to die
If you died today you would die in my arms .... A kiss to send you to the next life ...where I would find you again .
COMMENTS
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painfullyDark
10:09 Jan 14 2008
fallenangel51
01:47 Sep 04 2008
I hear the broken man. I feel your pain. Meet me under the tree.
xcrimsonlustx
13:00 Sep 06 2008
Be well friend! :)
Leinth
09:49 Apr 13 2009
There is no greater pain of feeling alone and broken......