Opening my eyes to a new world
The light Is now shining upon me
Is it love I feel when you call out my name
Oh so softly
Echoing thru the midnight sky
This feelings so intense
I feel something I have never felt before
A breath of life
The spark to ignite the fire within..
Please forgive me if you find me speechless
Its just your love is so pure and so unreal
Never met anyone like you before..
Scared to lose you..
Is this love?
Oh tell me please..
Its been so long..
But if you can take my hand and take me there
Show me what its like..
And I will give you all that is me
Cause I want your love
I need your touch
For all eternity.
Standing above the ashes of yesterday
So much pain
So much destruction
The smell of death is all around
Darkness covers the land
The rain never stops
The land is crying out in agony
Can't you hear the cries?
The homeless
The Elderly
The broken women
The dying children..
There must be a different way
Then this way in which we are living
A sunrise at the breaking of the storm..
Yes.. A new world
A new day
Our own Paradise..
Floating Lifelessly
Drifting away
Up here there is no pain
There are no worries
The stars oh so beautiful
Is this heaven?
Time goes by oh so slowly
It is eternal darkness
Then darkness no longer
The love I once believed had lost
Burns ever so brightly within..
Reaching out to the sun
Breaking thru the barrier of sound
Falling face down towards the unknown
This is it,
My final chance
Gods Gift to me from above from within
No more sin..
COMMENTS
Touching on a level unsurpassed by other means of self expression. Beautiful work.
Oh my.Very nice work.
*wipes a tear away*
Love it!!!! so touching.......
What can I say but, wonderful.
As my life comes to a closer I wish to tell you my feelings, so here you are.. Just me and you like old times, like when I told you my stupid rhymes.. You always told me to be strong, that one day everything would be ok.. And as I begin to think about it, you were always there for me, no matter what.. Its for that reason why I fell in love with you, there's so much you did for me.. I can't even name them all, and as time passed between you and me my heart began to sooth.. But at the same time you found somebody else and began to forget about me, but I stayed strong and no.. I shall never forget your face..
So now as my heart beat slowly comes to a halt, I just wanted to tell you that till the end of time I shall aways love you.. As if you were mine...
Its my time
Its my life
I am left so alone
I was nothing but a puppet to you
Selfish and unwise
Thoughts go through my head
Like a demon of dread
Your feelings just all fade
And now here I stand
Wondering
Where do I die
My minds so blank
So empty with each day that comes to pass,
Thoughts slip away as my heart starts to break
The rain is here
The sky is so unclear
Like a nuclear explosion
Formed from my reaction
This storm within wont settle down
like a piece of glass,
shattered within its self..
I'm so confused
Confused about life
Stupefied by death..
Is this the end of me now,
Or is this how we all fall?...
COMMENTS
Really nice. Its not the end of you, we all fall in life...its our strength that leads us back up. remember, once u fall there is no other way but up!
Well now please know that everyone fall at some point in life. Some more than others, once you have fallen though The only way out is up.
In a deep cold shelf lays a torn lonesome doll with nothing but memories to hold on to.. Sees its life flash before its eyes trying so desperately not to cry. Gives into its sorrow as the tears start to run down.. Where's the little child that once loved it.. This lonesome doll.. No longer around and nowhere to be found.. And from that day forward the life of that doll was turned upside down...
Looking into my reflection, ripping apart this skin, tearing through the flesh.. Mmm.. The pain, so bitter sweet as the blood runs from my vain.. Smearing cross the hour glass.. I don't know why you never asked me.. And I don't know why you never cared.. When you saw me laying lifeless on the blood stained floor.. Did you cry?... (Laughs)... Now its over... These bitter sweet feelings had to die.
The destruction from our ways.. The emptyness behind our smiles.. The hatred within each of our hearts.. Where do I start, where do I truly begin.. I must get clean again.. The blood on my hands.. The screams in my head.. They keep calling me.. ahhh.. its all to much to take.. can someone take away this pain.. sigh.. its all clear now.. I can never run from the truth.. this is my fate..
I have spent the best of my days in the ashes of yesterday.. watching as this world gets darker.. but now, I rise.. from the shattered dreams of falling angels.. Judgment is upon us all.. I am the alpha and omega.. Loves beginning and hates end.. I AM ZION
COMMENTS
-claps-Very good my friend
Very good work.
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DarkMoonLytexX
14:25 Feb 15 2010
Very well done.
FallenPrincess
07:05 Mar 16 2010
Very well said. I like.
an0ula
21:35 Apr 07 2010
i can't stop reading this poem... :)