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Is This Love?

17:48 Jan 29 2010
Times Read: 637


Opening my eyes to a new world

The light Is now shining upon me

Is it love I feel when you call out my name

Oh so softly

Echoing thru the midnight sky

This feelings so intense

I feel something I have never felt before

A breath of life

The spark to ignite the fire within..

Please forgive me if you find me speechless

Its just your love is so pure and so unreal

Never met anyone like you before..

Scared to lose you..

Is this love?

Oh tell me please..

Its been so long..

But if you can take my hand and take me there

Show me what its like..

And I will give you all that is me

Cause I want your love

I need your touch

For all eternity.


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DarkMoonLytexX
DarkMoonLytexX
14:25 Feb 15 2010

Very well done.





FallenPrincess
FallenPrincess
07:05 Mar 16 2010

Very well said. I like.





an0ula
an0ula
21:35 Apr 07 2010

i can't stop reading this poem... :)





 

Ashes Of Yesterday

21:34 Jan 26 2010
Times Read: 663


Standing above the ashes of yesterday

So much pain

So much destruction

The smell of death is all around

Darkness covers the land

The rain never stops

The land is crying out in agony

Can't you hear the cries?

The homeless

The Elderly

The broken women

The dying children..

There must be a different way

Then this way in which we are living

A sunrise at the breaking of the storm..

Yes.. A new world

A new day

Our own Paradise..


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Loves Break Thru

21:12 Jan 26 2010
Times Read: 665


Floating Lifelessly

Drifting away

Up here there is no pain

There are no worries

The stars oh so beautiful

Is this heaven?



Time goes by oh so slowly

It is eternal darkness

Then darkness no longer

The love I once believed had lost

Burns ever so brightly within..



Reaching out to the sun

Breaking thru the barrier of sound

Falling face down towards the unknown

This is it,

My final chance

Gods Gift to me from above from within

No more sin..


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Darkbutterfly
Darkbutterfly
21:43 Jan 26 2010

Touching on a level unsurpassed by other means of self expression. Beautiful work.





DarkMoonLytexX
DarkMoonLytexX
14:34 Jan 28 2010

Oh my.Very nice work.





missy
missy
05:54 Feb 13 2010

*wipes a tear away*

Love it!!!! so touching.......





FallenPrincess
FallenPrincess
07:08 Mar 16 2010

What can I say but, wonderful.





 

Last Rhyme

07:56 Jan 11 2010
Times Read: 698


As my life comes to a closer I wish to tell you my feelings, so here you are.. Just me and you like old times, like when I told you my stupid rhymes.. You always told me to be strong, that one day everything would be ok.. And as I begin to think about it, you were always there for me, no matter what.. Its for that reason why I fell in love with you, there's so much you did for me.. I can't even name them all, and as time passed between you and me my heart began to sooth.. But at the same time you found somebody else and began to forget about me, but I stayed strong and no.. I shall never forget your face..

So now as my heart beat slowly comes to a halt, I just wanted to tell you that till the end of time I shall aways love you.. As if you were mine...


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The Fall...

17:30 Jan 09 2010
Times Read: 714


Its my time

Its my life

I am left so alone

I was nothing but a puppet to you

Selfish and unwise

Thoughts go through my head

Like a demon of dread

Your feelings just all fade

And now here I stand

Wondering

Where do I die

My minds so blank

So empty with each day that comes to pass,

Thoughts slip away as my heart starts to break

The rain is here

The sky is so unclear

Like a nuclear explosion

Formed from my reaction

This storm within wont settle down

like a piece of glass,

shattered within its self..

I'm so confused

Confused about life

Stupefied by death..

Is this the end of me now,

Or is this how we all fall?...



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Khaotik
Khaotik
10:07 Jan 11 2010

Really nice. Its not the end of you, we all fall in life...its our strength that leads us back up. remember, once u fall there is no other way but up!





FallenPrincess
FallenPrincess
07:13 Mar 16 2010

Well now please know that everyone fall at some point in life. Some more than others, once you have fallen though The only way out is up.





 

Rag Doll

17:17 Jan 09 2010
Times Read: 715


In a deep cold shelf lays a torn lonesome doll with nothing but memories to hold on to.. Sees its life flash before its eyes trying so desperately not to cry. Gives into its sorrow as the tears start to run down.. Where's the little child that once loved it.. This lonesome doll.. No longer around and nowhere to be found.. And from that day forward the life of that doll was turned upside down...


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Khaotik
Khaotik
10:05 Jan 11 2010

oh i have one named rag doll too...so easy to compare ones self to a rag doll...





 

Bitter Sweet Feelings

02:14 Jan 06 2010
Times Read: 726


Looking into my reflection, ripping apart this skin, tearing through the flesh.. Mmm.. The pain, so bitter sweet as the blood runs from my vain.. Smearing cross the hour glass.. I don't know why you never asked me.. And I don't know why you never cared.. When you saw me laying lifeless on the blood stained floor.. Did you cry?... (Laughs)... Now its over... These bitter sweet feelings had to die.


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xXBLOODxROSEXx
xXBLOODxROSEXx
00:16 Jan 10 2010

omg amazing.....0.o





 

Truth Is Harder Then Fiction...

05:00 Jan 04 2010
Times Read: 734


The destruction from our ways.. The emptyness behind our smiles.. The hatred within each of our hearts.. Where do I start, where do I truly begin.. I must get clean again.. The blood on my hands.. The screams in my head.. They keep calling me.. ahhh.. its all to much to take.. can someone take away this pain.. sigh.. its all clear now.. I can never run from the truth.. this is my fate..


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Jiggle817
Jiggle817
10:17 Jan 09 2010

sounds like its coming straight from the heart.. i like that..





 

The Rise Of Zion. . .

01:14 Jan 02 2010
Times Read: 746


I have spent the best of my days in the ashes of yesterday.. watching as this world gets darker.. but now, I rise.. from the shattered dreams of falling angels.. Judgment is upon us all.. I am the alpha and omega.. Loves beginning and hates end.. I AM ZION


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DarkMoonLytexX
DarkMoonLytexX
01:29 Jan 02 2010

-claps-Very good my friend





Darkbutterfly
Darkbutterfly
21:46 Jan 26 2010

Very good work.








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