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Beautiful.
rainbows in complex eyes...there's poetry in there somewhere.
I liked the "bed of flower petals" for the mating crane flies. That was poetic. And not a bad idea.
It was a simple act of murder; more of a killing really. Somehow it seems not wrong and yet the losses are no less. The logic, I suppose, is irrefutable: we all have the right to kill just one person, without regard to who might feel that death most deeply. So there is nothing to be said and no "justice" to pursue. But what remains is the smokey debris-strewn battlefield -- a permanent residence for those left behind.
Swimming in the dark, attempting to buoy a sinking sea mate who sees only the horizon beyond your eyes and says not a word for your ears. Your help is invisible; tangible, but not felt. So you swim along, hoping to keep them aloft, each in turn. With nothing left you grab for hope even after it has come to rest on the sandy bottom. And when the shore finally comes, it will come not for you.
There remains a distant familiarity -- a ghost of the mind. But the similarity is an illusion. The heart beats no more. The pastel-painted, plaster face smiles a petrified porcelain smile. They are dead -- murdered by the hand you trusted most. This; that the dead may survive... and the survivor live eternal death.
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birra
17:27 Mar 30 2009
Spectacular and amazing, as always!