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Trend of Sympathy

00:03 Jan 17 2008
Times Read: 760


For once in a time and place

One person may have their soul to embrace

Such a decison may be laid before yore

A chilling is sent all through your core

My breathe is taken from deep within

The angel of death comes with a grin

The chariot's steed rage on my journey's end

I think I may have though of this my last trend

As I make this journey I look back and i decree

That of the sympathy i thought i never felt is what i truy see

As I make my final decree


COMMENTS

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Akasha420
Akasha420
00:15 Jan 17 2008

ohh i like its sexy lol





Rayemoone
Rayemoone
02:27 Jun 06 2008

Wow your an amazing Poet!





DevilicousStar
DevilicousStar
19:44 Jul 21 2008

WOW. I love this poem. It's really really neat.





Evita
Evita
04:27 Sep 24 2008

Wow...uh, yeah, just...wow, lol





danirose
danirose
02:40 Oct 07 2008

i love it!!





DeadHeir
DeadHeir
19:33 Oct 12 2008

good scheme without making the rhymes seem corny, overused, or repetitious.



i like it, a lot








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