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Down in hell of life

20:35 Sep 16 2010
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So you feel inside

Death upon you run away

For you bare the hell of life

So the death falls in to the light



Death becomes you no matter what

We are nothing

Slowly forgot



Downward spiral of the hate of man

The world you come across is end

Death is the way to the solemn land

Forgotten 11th Command



Welcome to the desert end

Christ compel you

Death calls upon thy very soul



Pulled from the darkness

Seen into light

Desperate times

Come for eternal mind


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DestroyingAngel
DestroyingAngel
00:08 Sep 20 2010

I really liked this poem alot, Jon. Powerful and filled with the burdens and sorrows of life...and how it often feels when you're alone in this world.

Thank you for sharing it. *big huggggsss*





phantomsgrief
phantomsgrief
05:54 Jan 31 2011

a very descriptive poem








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