Gossamer green swathes her form,
and all around me the woodland
weaves it’s magical spell, as shafts
of sunlight penetrate the leaves
overhead o my face, an for moments
o perfection, like this, I live. I Live.
Lookin at my friends list
I got to feelin pissed, for
it seems some are selective
and quite often defective,
as the Moon plays hijinx,
like the Minx she is…
Girl on a bike
white dress
golden flowing
hair; as she pumps
her legs, smiling;
just enjoying believing
alive on a fine blue sky,
warm day out in the green
lanes, to The Mere , when
a fellow in a black short,
sports car, and slick black
hair and shades takes the
corner, way too wide,
spoiling her day.
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wow pretty sad great poem though
Wow...
This one was fantatic. It was as if I was there, as if I could feel the wind in my hair. On my face. The warmth of the day on my skin.
and then suddenly...
*gets the chills*
society makes the rich rich
and leaves the crumbs, for
the bums on the street &
it is them who will pay, as
'they' say, let them eat cake.
On the way back from Raby Mere, I concluded that every dog-walker leaving their plastic bags of poop, every walker leaving their health-giving natural spring water plastic bottle, on the green verge and, every motorist, who drive too fast down the green lanes, with music too loud, leaving their fast-food cartons and packaging on the side of the road and, in the green bushes with many in flower and even examples of all of these thrown down the embankment in the woods, to fall by the stream, should be hung, drawn and quartered.
remember that line in Trainspotting?
Choose to Live.
And, look for a reason later.
One can't regret it afterward.
a smile,
a hand
a walk
on sand
awhile.
**clap hands**
Playaway wayaplay wayaplay wayaplay, A plaway, wayaplay wayaplay wayaplay wayaplay wayaplay… day.
**clap hands**
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great write as always neil~
you always seem to know what to write about. love your work as always. ^_^
Some people speak of honour and trust
yet their words are not fit for the birds
especially the ones that sit ‘neath their
userpic, to the right of the screen, if’n
you know what I mean? After all, they
speak of tolerance, yet show none and,
expect of others, while they supply little
to none themselves; and meanwhile, their
rants betray their hypocrisy, as they speak
well of those, who do as they have spoken
so badly of, time passed. And, that is to say,
that they should pay for their eloquence, with
a heavy dose of honesty: that few will provide.
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whimsical yet thought provoking; I like it
you are most right!
I like this.
Another great poem :)
Truthseekers look at the gamesplayers, wondering why they can be mean and, how can it feel, to be such a bein, who is nasty and quarrelsome, seemingly, just for the sake of it and, they wonder what they can make of it, as they do as they do; and yet, by talking of it and, confrontin them about what they say and do, they are just giving them, what they want, yet more attention; yet truthseekers can do no less… if for no other reason that some cannot say as they can and, for the harm they cause, gamers are an annoyance, that one must address...
{{…even tho it’d be better, to picture them in white fluffy mules and a Pink Dress.}}
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Are they not ALL part of the game then?
See? There's the difference, one sees it as a game, the other doesn't.
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true words and hits close to home. I seem to have the sagey issue as of lately.
Dear Mr Cameron,
Mr Osbourne says Labour left us broke,
yet we can give gift aid to ‘poor’ China,
soon-to-be the new superpower, an we can
give aid-money to Pakistan, who have been
known to use this money to support the Taliban
and, all this time, cuts are being made to necessary public services; and the planes that are in Libya are piloted by men who might soon find themselves unemployed; and now, the EU tell us we have to give money to Portugal, because they’re broke?
Mister Cameron, Mr Osbourne says we are broke, so have can we give aid to poor China, or Pakistan, or send pilot-less planes to Libya, to take part in yet another war, while the EU tell us that we now have to support Portugal, with financial-aid? What further cuts will have to be made to support poor Portugal, Mister Cameron?
Respectfully Yours,
A British voter, since 1978
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every country is broke! Hell if we are so broke how can the government afford a 50,000 dollar hammer
Conception, none.
Near, perhaps?
Perception, biased.
Clarity, little.
Clear, be.
Dear? Maybe?
Dear? Maybe?
Clear, be.
Percepion, biased?
Conception, none.
Clarity, little.
Near, perhaps?
I’ll write a redemption song, with words
that even they could understand, if they
took their hands from their eyes and chose
to listen: yet the chance of that happenin
are slim to none, ‘coz for some, the words
of others are nowt but shite.
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Just how many times does one bend over backwards, hoping that someone will mean what they say, instead of just being mean?
They talk of tolerance; yet show little to none, to those that are near them, whilst exalting their use of my language, while ignoring the fact that they choose not to see what they have written themselves and, all the while they talk of tolerance and display little to none, then they wonder where everyone has gone.
And Now, I see what they write and it all seems quite trite… and y’know… I’m just not impressed.
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I have seen a few here that make me feel the same way.But then,those such as yourself come to mind oe send a message and suddenly,the triteness I just read is yesterday's annoying news.
Some don't realize that word cause pain , they burn holes in your brain.
but it takes a life time for the pain of words to heal.
Sorry to hear that others can be so insensitive.
No more will my Mother enjoy looking
at the Blue-Bells that I planted beneath
the hedge at the side of the drive, that
I culled from the woods near where we
live, that I brought for her when I was
less than a teen one Mothers Day, but
this is another one, many years later and,
I’ve been sewing, although not as well
as she did; and my Dad is making both
of us our Sunday roast, that isn’t as good
as she made, so he says; and, we never do
the housework as well as she did: and yet,
come the meal, that he made so well, we
then raise a glass of a red, “To Mum.”
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raise one for me and hugs to you. love your words very heart felt.
VERY deep...
Powerful and beautiful. Another amazing poem here. I loved it.
Hugs.,.I really like this piece!
Beware Midean
‘Beware Midean
where the monsters
dwell’, wrote Barker.
Yet, to paraphrase
Marlowe, beware the
Humankind, for
we are the Monsters
to beware of…
We are the one’s who
believe that progress
is to be found in always
‘moving on’ unable to be
content, with who we are
and, with what we have.
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NoctusAngelusProcella
00:14 May 01 2011
lovely makes me think of spring
Danijela
11:52 May 07 2011
like it :)