i felt his fangs sink into my flesh the venom of his kind spreding through out my body it felt like fire white hot fire i held in the grusome screamas it spread to my heart through every vien in my body my flesh paled my eyes turned a visous red purple color fangs over 3 inchs long grew from my canines my hair grew wildly turning a beautiful snowy white and with one last thud my heart stopped for the rest of eternaty i stop up straight flexing my arms "are you happy with this new form?" dean asked "oh yes, yes i surely am" i replied with a gleaming smile i pointed my finger at the wall and frost began to form on it soon cracking the cement thus making the wall crumble under its own weight "cool and i have cool powers to" i smiled i disappered into the shadows to feed and become what i always wanted to be ... a vampire
i slammed my fist on the stone wall i had been here for 3 days my kidnapper has sealed me in hear a few days ago concret dry and all my fist bloodied from the pund i have done when will i be released "help someone any one!!" i screamed "please anyone help me" i sobbed i was weak from lack of food and terrafied i screamed one last time before i sank to the floor "why why me what have i done to any one" i sobbed quietly "exacly the reson your in here ypu have done nothing thus your life is meaningless besides the door under your bed was wide open all the time so i can come and and teach you lessons as i please" i screamed as he stabbed a knife deep into my arm and and twisted i could hear his sickening laugh as he pull down ripped my muscle i screamed again "i'm sorry what ever i did i'm sorry for it!" he laughed and i felt a ripping in my thoaght as he slit my though all the sound i could make now was gurgaling sound and wimpers and soon i let the darkness of death over take me the last thing i heard was "she was a coward the lesson here is it's vitale to live now because i just might kill you later on" he said though a chukle as i finally was fully ingulfed in death
COMMENTS
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vampchica4
00:50 May 10 2009
what a great talent you have!!