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This is a poem I wrote for my fiance, it is my 4th attempt (I think) at writing a poem, and honestly, I think it sucks. But, I'll let others be the judge. What matters is, he loved it. Please, no harsh critisism.









We are like the Ocean and the Sky

Very different, yet connected

But only by a faint line

Do you ever wonder what lies on the horizon?

What distant lands are awaiting our visit?

I want to go there with you

To have adventures, to see different places

I would travel to the ends of Earth and back with you

I would travel to the ends of Earth and back for you

My devotion to you is like a River

Forever flowing, even in Winter

And it matters not if the Sun takes the Water

For I am like the tiny Fish who thrive regardless

And that is what we both must do

We have the will to make it through

You are more to me than sensual pleasures and sexual fantasies

You are not just my fiance

You are my everything, you are my all

You keep me going, push my forward, and never let me fall

My love for you is like a forest

It's easy to get lost with love, isn't it?

But I'll be there to hold your hand

And guide you through when times look bad

I've said this before, and I'll say it again

I love you, Ismael Orion Ravenlock

Forever, always, and without end





~Axora Enrion Ambergris~

September 18, 2009

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SystematicNeuralgia06
15:17 Nov 17 2009

it really nice... he should love it...

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AURORAEVE3
10:56 Nov 12 2011

umm dont you think you should take this down bye now ? i mean its kinda weird and all !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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