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blind, bound in darkness

i still see your deceit

deaf, trapped by silence

i still hear your lies

because of you we die

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toxicbite23
12:53 Mar 19 2012

Really Awesome poem.

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KindellFlames
04:47 Sep 03 2012

Hunny one of these days I will be as good as u. Love u sweetie miss u!!!

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tear the flesh and shatter the bones

break the heart and rip out the soul

leaving nothing but a gaping hole



destroy the spirit and crush the will

feast on the blood till you've had your fill

nothing now is left, nothing but the beast

calling out only silence

none of you can hear her

see this pain

hear these cries

of course not

all of you have forgotten



wandering lost and alone

can anyone help her

why do you all just pass her by

holding out her hand

none of you look her way

none of you hear what she says



by all she once was known

for none were innocent or sweeter

but now tears flood her eyes

torn apart by your deceit and lies

still moving forward she faces another day

lost and alone, used and forgotten

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skyrah
05:52 Nov 10 2011

its got a deep meaning . Really nice

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toxicbite23
06:45 Nov 10 2011

I agree.... it has a very eep meaning and is heart wrenching....

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DemonQueen
02:03 Nov 11 2011

Very nice and can relate to this poem

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KRISTIN
02:33 Dec 01 2011

yeah... i really like this poem babe

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a monster now bears the crown

while in a red river we all drown

reach out your hand

grasping for nothing



can you hear them crying

while the monster is rejoicing

bathing in tears

thriving off our fears



dying slowly for a thousand years

we bow our heads in shame

burning to ashes, so afraid to die

when nobody knows our name

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toxicbite23
12:10 Nov 06 2011

This is a very deep poem...

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alone he wanders

lonely and free

bleeding slowly

his heart is stone



alone he wanders

dying in pain

slowly going insane

his heart is no longer his own



come to me my fallen angel

let me hold you in my arms

fly to me on jet black wings

let me be the one to save you

and forever of our love we will sing

eternal darkness, swallowing me

bound by chains, never free

i've never seen, the light of day

no one ever listens, to what i say



now stand back and enjoy the show

i'll put everything you've seen to shame

this is the end of all you know

welcome to my wonderful game



destroying love, devouring hate

obliterating happiness, ravaging anger

nothing will remain, within my sight

but fear not children, its only fate

watch the fire spread, further and further

watch it all fade away in burning light

can you see me now, as i burn it all

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NoctusAngelusProcella
12:47 Nov 04 2011

wow this is really good. very good and to the point.

great pen!

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strip the flesh from the bone

your soul you no longer own

now open your eyes

see the end of days

as the sun's last light

slowly fades away



watch now as everything burns

for only your freedom do you yearn

this all is happening because of your lies

see it now as the lightning crashes

filling the darkness with brilliant light

nothing is left but the ashes

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NoctusAngelusProcella
16:49 Nov 02 2011

wow this is super good. keep writing!

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the terrible blaze cosumes all

to me, even the mightiest of kings

will soon fall

the smell of death soon fills the air

as all the world falls

into my oh so simple snare



for no one but yourselves do you care

and so the same fate

you all will share

as i raise my head

and ignite the flame

it matters not

who is to blame



as i spread my wings

the black fire spreads

of this dark day

you used to fearfully sing

now run you bastards

cower in fear

hide you hypocrites

the end is here

the dragon has risen

and it is your judgement day

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NoctusAngelusProcella
17:11 Nov 02 2011

I find poetry to be more interesting when it isn't in first person. try using tighter sentence structure, like dropping words like and, the, ect. You do have a way with words but poems of too much length tend to bore readers and they won't finish a piece

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KindellFlames
21:09 Nov 02 2011

I really like this one!! I have missed ur writing.

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