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night

19:03 Aug 22 2009
Times Read: 518


night

night is one thing

to look forward to

to see nothing but the

night as you close your eyes

or when you open your eyes

to see nothing but the

night

to go to sleep

and to be awaken

or to be for ever a sleep

night time is just the right time

to do what ever

and for ever

as we always close our eyes

to get that good or bad night sleep

the night is what we need

the day just goes away just like the night

but when we die we for ever see darkness

since we seen the light

dont worry its just a night

so let every day be a new day

yes a new day and every night a blessing

dark night so sleep tie for to

night and every night good

night


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A, B, C, 1, 2, 3

05:38 Aug 15 2009
Times Read: 520


A, B, C, 1, 2, 3

A can be anything

if you think about it but it can’t be

B since it can’t be anything

if you think about it but it can’t see

C be acquainted with that info the

1 just stands by its self plus

2 always stay together other than adding it

3 comes in one big group making it

A, B, C, 1, 2, 3


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I need you with me

05:37 Aug 15 2009
Times Read: 521


I need you with me

In a dream I’m with you with the

Ring on our finger

Taking on the world

We can go anywhere

With out the dream its you with me still

Taking on the world

I’m doing what's wrong and right

You right beside me tilling me

what's wrong and right

In needing you-you like I need weed over and above cigarette

I don’t even smoke and that’s the way

I-I needing you with me

When ever with or with out a dream it’ll be

You and me

Me and you ya

You-you and me ya

Me-me and you

We’ll ride and die

I ride for you an you ride for me

You and I we’ll always be together and for ever

Since I need-need you

when ever with or with out a dream it’ll always be

In my sympathy that I need you… with me


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when will this stop

05:34 Aug 15 2009
Times Read: 522


when will this stop and end

I’m sick of everything on what we made

on what we done to our world

it looks like its too late to do anything

why we keep doing the same thing over an over

hurting this world we live in

with everything that we can get our hands on and in

our world had been on a lot of things on what we

did I’m sick of it when will this stop and end

I’m sick of everything on what we made

on what we done to our world

when will this stop


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I lost my friend

05:30 Aug 15 2009
Times Read: 523


I-I cant believe it I lost my friend

that know what I was talking about

that know how it feels to be a poem

that know that every time you write

you put your feelings in it

you put your every sweat, tears, bleed from your

hand uncontrollably writing it

you put just you in everyone's shoes an see

how it feels to be everyone's shoes so

you can do whatever to make anyone feel

whatever feeling you like I-I

cant believe it I lost my friend or you lost your friend

see ya don’t know what I’m talking about do ya know?

I lost my friend


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Drag races

05:29 Aug 15 2009
Times Read: 524


Is what I do, do every night and day

Its in my blood it rushes through my veins

Is the lights along with the flag is what gets me ready

The noise that I hear makes me see how rapidly I should go from point A to point B just to get some green in my hand however I just do it for fun and forget the cops that’s on my tail

Its in my blood it rushes through my veins

This is what I do and will never stop

Is what I do, do every night and day

Drag races


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Think before you speak

05:28 Aug 15 2009
Times Read: 525


Think before you speak!

ssh–ssh-ssh don’t talk …don’t talk!

I told you now don’t talk

Think before you speak

before you get your adams apple slice

you know what I mean

Talking all that!

ssh-ssh

you know what I mean

Talking like you all big and bad but

your not…you mother!

ssh-ssh

you know what I mean

You just talk with out thinking what your

about to say," I have feelings too”

do you know what I mean

but you just talk like your untouchable

but your not! your just a!

ssh!!

don’t talk… think you hear me

Think! before you speak


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Ganja

05:27 Aug 15 2009
Times Read: 526


Ya that’s what I need

. I need it from today

till the day I die ya!

I know it’s the reason why all my doors close on me

it’s the reason why it doesn’t let the evil that’s with in me-me out

Gets me high to the sky which gets me high oh? I said it again I cant even think right ya I cant go on I’m high

Ya that’s what I need … Yes indeed I need

Ganja


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How could I

05:26 Aug 15 2009
Times Read: 527


How could I, kiss you and lie saying

me and you should be together.

Stay with another girl

and

still be with you!

How could I, keep kissing another girl

and

stop kissing you!

How could I, forget that one girl sweet

lips and for me just to forget about

your lips because you make me

Sick!

How could I, gone out with that one beautiful girl

and gone dump you selfish girl.

The truth is …

I like that one sexy woman but not you girl

and as I walk away, Don’t stand there all

Alone

Thinking things to say to me

I just want you to know

Get A Life!!

Oh! How could I.


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Every moment in time

05:24 Aug 15 2009
Times Read: 529


each split second the wind blows, its me walking by your side but

each moment it rains its me crying hoping you don’t give up on me as I don’t give up on you

each moment the sun shines in your window its me showing you the way so you don’t fade away

every moment in time you dream about our wonderful memory's I’m thanking of you until the end of time

Every moment in time you look up at the stars just know one day you will be with me for ever and always for

Every moment in time


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I didn’t know

05:23 Aug 15 2009
Times Read: 530


I didn’t know what to do but to say I love you ?

I couldn't forget what you did

You was on me and I was on you doing what we shouldn't be doing

she was all up on me getting me in love

Doing it for the first time

I didn’t know what to do but she was like

I got this

Doing me hard , I didn’t know what do but I was like i-i-i …. ah I

she was all up on me getting me head and then jump on me non-stop

Doing it for the first time

Doing me hard , I didn’t know what do but I was like i-i-i …. ah I

Love you?

I didn’t know what to do, her body was on me and I was hard like a rock yearn for that feeling, that feeling that craving for love but it wasn’t love it was just sex, just sex and she doing me harder and harder non-stop, now me and her can only say i-i-i …. ah I love you? she said then wisped in my ear that’s twenty dollars more I didn’t know what to do but to say I love you ?

I couldn't forget what you did

You was on me and I was on you doing what we shouldn't be doing

she was all up on me getting me in love

Doing it for the first time

I didn’t know what to do but she was like

I got this

Doing me hard , I didn’t know what do but I was like i-i-i …. ah I didn’t know…. hoe


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darktader
darktader
13:53 Aug 28 2009

wow dude taht was realy deep....di u get that off a bumper sticker?



lol just kidding...nice work bro.





 

Money

05:22 Aug 15 2009
Times Read: 531


Having the money that I had is blood

money… I can’t say I’m proud of my self

or even say I love what I do for a living

I can’t!... having this money, but even

more money means more problems as

well more life's taken away I can’t!!

forget this shit that’s been on my mind, the

money that always keep coming, every deal

I make and how so many deals gone bad

I’ve given up… I’m sick of living fuck!

I-I can’t deal with this shit but I need the

money to keep looking fly

to even put food on the table

so me and my family can eat everyday

knowing the money I have is not only

drug money but my blood money

for so many life's that comes and go

I just can’t stop getting money

so I know I’ll die by getting money

yes I said it by getting

money


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Is-the-bell

05:20 Aug 15 2009
Times Read: 532


Is-the-bell that is always on my mind

everyday and every night even

every hour and every minute as will

every second and every brief in my life time

I’m thinking of

Is-the-bell, Is-the-bell

is going or is not going to sing out loud

to the point where I touch or grab and push plus

move up and down all around just moving

up and down and around uncontrollably just

drives me crazy every night

sometimes I can’t sleep with out you as my life

goes on I know the time will stop but since its been

on my mind

Is-the-bell, Is-the-bell wait let me slow down

is the bell well ever stop ringing in my head


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The duck

05:18 Aug 15 2009
Times Read: 533


The duck

is the duck that took my cook book

and put it away the duck is like no other duck

since it came out of nowhere and

said quack, quack, quack

and I was like give it back, back, back

the duck quack and it finely got to me

the duck took that book since it know

ill cook its bitch ass that’s why The duck is the duck

that took my cook book wont be a dead duck ya

The duck


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I shouldn’t let the world get to me

05:17 Aug 15 2009
Times Read: 534


Ya I’m lost-lost in my mind, wondering why I got a

little bit time left



Ya, I understand cause time

is a factor my mind longs for.

Yet I haven’t found my true reason for being in

such a lonesome place, why? why must I

continue on this horrible road



Ya, I’m lost-lost in my mind, always wondering

why I got a little bit of time left

The time-time is going so fast since I took that road and

never look back on what I did, Ya on what I did



My road was filled with pain and despair.

Understanding what I should do is my biggest problem.

I try-try my hardest-hardest not to lose what's left of my mind and soul.

Poetry is all I have to release what's trapped inside of me-me



Ya…I’m lost in my mind, always…

and forever wondering… its such a little time I got left!!

the clock is ticking, I’m starting to see the light,

that car is going as fast as possible!

I’m staring to see my past and tears drop from my eyes…

I’m on my knees ya



I’ve been on my knees praying to God asking for help,

wanting to accomplish all my needs.

What does it take to live happily?



its doing what's right…



but when I do something right something always goes wrong,

why do things always turn out to be bad



bad indeed but for me to take this road and

not the other road to the right path that was set for me

will always keep my mind wondering

Ya I’m lost-lost in my mind ya wondering

constantly why oh why I got a little bit of time left…

its because the car is getting face to face

non-stop uncontrollably

I shouldn’t let the world get me



Beep!=Beeeep!...Boom!!!!


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Torture

05:15 Aug 15 2009
Times Read: 535


Its Torture

to see someone dead

to have there life in your hands

and die with a blink of an eye

having your gun on your hand with

pride, determination, and resilience

the law judges the book of a cover

with the blink of an eye

they get ready, aim, fire! uncontrollable

Its Torture

over an over again seeing on what you did

over and over crying knowing you can’t go back

and change everyday by day that pass by.

just with a blink of an eye

you can close that someone eyes with your fingers.

so that someone wont see what the world got for you

Its Torture

remaining to stay in one spot

refusing to not move at all.

As three seconds passes by like three hours

and the tears becomes rain drops knowing what's coming to you

Its Torture

chooses that kills you inside will never

change when your eyes close for ever and ever

praying will be to late since five hours pass by…wait let me say that

again since five seconds passes by

Its Torture

here wishing to not be

here at a place where everyone can see you for who you are

and to see if you have the

pride, determination, and resilience to doing one thing

Its Torture

dying fast as hell since every little red

dots are all around you but the gun

and for what? just because you want it to save someone you know but

you where to late, if they only knew…

ten hours didn’t pass by this time only

ten seconds I’m sorrry….

and with a blink of an eye

they got ready, they aim, and they fire uncontrollable

to wish upon that they stop shooting its just… just …its real

Torture


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The two things I got

05:14 Aug 15 2009
Times Read: 536


The two things I got in this world is

My word and

My Balls and I don’t break for Nobody

So you can tell me what's up

I can do anything just tell me what it is

you can trust me since I’m not at all a worm!

since I only have two things I got in this world

My word and

My Balls and I don’t break for Nobody

you got that!


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Tell me you love me

05:12 Aug 15 2009
Times Read: 537


Tell me you love me…

advise me you need me…

Tell me you got ways to get me back

and that you don’t care what it takes

to get me back… just

Tell me you are my world and that I don’t

care what Anyone has to say

….just enlighten me please….

Tell me you will be gentle as there is a

beauty in being gentle that only real love can

recognize…

notify me I do, when I ask you to marry me…

Tell me you want me, you’ll always be there,

well be together for all times…

Tell me you want to make love with me… not

sex but love in bed, bed, b-ed…

I love you but can you

Tell me you love me not good bye…


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No body’s listening

05:11 Aug 15 2009
Times Read: 538


What ever I say no body’s listening,

If some kid was dying and I scream

for help! no body’s listening,

I try to give a warning but everyone

Ignores me but no body’s listening,

so if you talk so much bull and

you don’t want to hear me then

I’m not listening!

I try to do everything for you so you could

hear me for one last time but no body’s listening

Not even you the one

I thought was my everything you just

wouldn’t listen to me and now you talk

so much bull about me to every

One I know and now no body’s listening!

what I got to say, I just want you to know

I do want you back and I’m sorry but I guess you

don’t want to hear me and that’s why no body’s listening

what I got to say.


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Does heaven really exist ? Will I see you again

05:08 Aug 15 2009
Times Read: 539


Does heaven really exist!

will I see you again ..

for one last time ……just to

hug you … as hard as I can

talk to you .. to the point where I lose my voice

seeing you . so I can see you smile just

for one last time …..

Does heaven really exist!!

will I see you again ..

beside that fact that your gone

not beside me ...saying I love you

not in front of me ..telling me what to do

not behind me .saying I got your back just

for one last time ….

Does heaven really exist!!!

will I or will I not see you again .

Missing you … to the point where I lose it

Thinking about you .. in heaven where I can see you

again for one more time, but for me not believing heaven so strongly well always

keep me thinking

Does heaven really exist ….

will ... will I see you again.


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