swimming in darkness is all i feel
lies and bad dreams fills my mind
hurt and pain bleeds my soul
enemies all around with not light to be found
a blind eye to turn away
a blind moment will destroy any day
im talking war of the heart
over mind
when nothing balanced when it all overwhelms
the hatred the trust the truth the lies
the love all things that are specail
seem to get dark dark
every dark tunnel has a light
but what if u just swimming in the dark
the dream of all dreams
the one that you love will love you
the closer you get to the dream
further it comes a reality
people comes in complex themes
the perfect look is part of a dream
if the person too good to be true it is
the flaws dissappear with time
looking in people faces and there heart
thats when you find all your dreams
looking finding seeing into all hearts
the body can be control mind and heart
so dream of a perfect person
and but a scar on there face
there it would be
the dream
COMMENTS
I like this one. Nicely done.
Intensely Magnificent!
The Dream is the Heart of all things!
the awaken heart brighten my days
but darkens my nights
not having someone to hold me tight
feeling empty inside am i living
or living a dream
sometimes i all i want to do
is just to scream
falling across the spikes with open hands
is a pain i can stand
the dead how more shine
as i sit hit and lie
COMMENTS
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LadyKrystalynDarkstar
05:22 Sep 11 2009
This one is sad and scary but I like it.
RomaMarieNightwing
15:05 Sep 22 2009
So real, So true & So Excellent!
NoctusAngelusProcella
22:47 Oct 30 2009
the darkness has a way with closing in on all of us very well written
MsSanguinarius
23:44 Oct 30 2009
nice!
Danijela
00:25 Dec 30 2010
I like it