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you said

two words

with those words

my world came down



my dreams were crushed

my hope was shaterred



i was forced to be a friend

when my heart was ripped from my chest



now i sit with a knife in my heart

and the pain of memorys turned

dark my world upside down



why do i even whant to live

let alone breathe



now i live to see you with

her but you dont fill pain



you don't live with the hurt thats

like a dagger dragging your heart

down to where you can heal it.



i still live because im strong

you live because you dont care



no matter how broken i am

this time you cant fix me.

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muckymuck
13:26 Oct 01 2008

Very good poem. Isn't it amazing how the most pain can breed the most and greatest creativity?

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demonlovesyou
18:09 Oct 01 2008

Oh this sad flow of rhyme from this sad verse



I loved this poem most...

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