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all it takes is one

09:04 Aug 11 2009
Times Read: 532


All it takes is one touch,

The one that is one to much.

One touch to fill me with fear,

No matter who is near.



All it takes is one word,

The one that should stay unheard.

One word to make someone hurt,

But they never get what they truely deserve.



All it takes is one fear,

The one that seems so severe.

One fear to drive you so far away,

Yet you never get away.



All it takes is one chance,

The one chance to make a good or bad advance.

one chance to tart a new,

Or will you turn bad? Its all up to you.



All it takes is one stand,

The stand remembered by all of man.

Yet never as bright as the sun,

Remember, all it takes is one.



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pretty girl

09:03 Aug 11 2009
Times Read: 533


Pretty girl is suffering,

As she lays on the floor in pain.

She cant get himout of her head,

No matter what she does.

She fell for him,

And she tries to take him down with her.

pretty girl tries to forget,

The wayhe loved and cared for her.

Now there is blood on her hands,

And only the thought of him.

Blood is starting to shine,

thats what surrounds her.

She wants to forget,

What she learned fromhim.

Why must She feel everything,

But it was never real.

She is now cold and pale,

But sha is still real.

Death showed her no mercy,

As she goes on liveing.

Pain and cold is all shefeels,

Because to her, nothing is real.

The walking dead she shall be,

pretty girl, not at all pretty,

That girl, she is me.







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invisable

09:01 Aug 11 2009
Times Read: 534


Everyday, it is the same,

Nothing will ever change.

I am completely invisable,

I am just an invisable rebel.

No one seems to see me,

Even though i am plain to see.

I walk through this place,

As a ghost with a pale face.

People dont even see me,

Or everything i could be.

I am a racer out of a race,

A pacer with no pace.

I just want tobe seen,

But i know that all i can do is keep dreaming.

I am someone everyone knows of my name,

But that doesnt meen that i have fame.

Im a ghost that cant walk through walls,,

As i watch my hard work fall.

I do so much for nothing,

Just wishing i could recieve a smile or a little something.

I wonder if it is possible,

That one day i wont be invisable.



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love or so i thought

08:58 Aug 11 2009
Times Read: 535


I truly dont know what to do,

After the thought of falling in love with you.

I thoght you felt the same,

But it was me loseing at my hearts game.

what i saw in your eyes were the for another,

The thought just makes me studder.

Of course i fell again,

This is becomeing my only deadly sin.

Why does this always happening to me,

This thing that is never fore seen.

I will just die alone,

And just turn this once warm heart to cold stone.

Now i will leave you to ponder,

As my heart pounds no longer.



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after you left me

06:25 Aug 11 2009
Times Read: 538


alone i feel,

my heart you did steal.

pain is inside,

you cant the tears i cried.

darkness is around,

you never caught me as i fell to the ground.

empty deep inside,

i just cant help but ask why?

strong no more,

what was all this for?

you all i wanted in life,

and now ill never feel right.

you lied to me and my heart,

but i should have known from the start.

you held me up to throw me down,

me falling and crashing is the only sound.

you were there for me in my worst,

but now i feel myself begin to burst.

you promised to catch me if i fell,

now im lost in a deep well.

never will i fall again,

never i tell you my friend.



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hmm

22:24 Aug 07 2009
Times Read: 545


fear is overwhelming,

hope is slowly dieing.

what is around isnt all as it seems,

there are things that go unseen.

your cries are all in vain,

as you stand only in pain.

blood fills your tears,

as your hate turns into fear.

your start shaking and breath hard,

as memories return from afar.

you tremble in fear,

you wipe away your silent tear.

you run from what you cant see,

and you hide fron this very thing.

you do not know what you are running from,

but its got you and you can no longer run.


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demons within

23:25 Aug 06 2009
Times Read: 552


though i try to fight the demons within me,

they only seem to be set free.

they rage with anger and rage,

but i refuse to do the samw.

they awakin within me tryin to take control,

but i must fight to take back wat they stole.

they steal my thoughts and they stole my soul,

and yet they still havent gained control.

i must fight til this very end,

not ever alone but standin tall with my friends.

so go ahead and awakin the demon and start the war,

there will always be something meaning much more.


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YourDeathAngel
YourDeathAngel
09:00 Aug 10 2009

i find myself a little in this poem

very beautiful





 

*random*

21:09 Aug 06 2009
Times Read: 555


Lay me down in red in the dark,

As you promise you wont break this heart.

Kiss my eyes and lay me to sleep,

As you whisper that you will never leave.

You held me tight thru the night,

And told me everything will be all right.

You told me youd love me till the end of time,

As i called you mine.



I believed those words you spoke,

But know they are the razors to my throat.

You laid me down and stomped that heart,

as you lied from the start.

Now all your sreams are silent,

As your life is absord into the cement.

Fall again i will not,

But you are now falling and cant stop.


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VAMPIREBONNIE
VAMPIREBONNIE
00:24 Aug 07 2009

Beautifully written








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